A nice abstract piece!
I have a penchant for pieces like this... music that I can get lost in and forget where I am... :)
I kind of agree that that little pause could be lengthened ever so slightly, with a slight more build up just before... but it is excellent... this would be grand to hear you play live at a show, man!!
Huzzah, and I did enjoy this very much!
ps, and to the rather closed-minded poster: of course the dissonance works, it's that dissonance that makes the theme what it is, because it is balanced with tonality and relief!